Bookediting services for novelists.

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Manuscript eval

Your first step forward!

Think of this as your manuscript's diagnostic check—a high-level exploration that maps your story's current landscape. I'll examine your work from a bird's-eye view, identifying the key elements that drive your narrative forward and spotting opportunities for growth. This comprehensive assessment pinpoints where your manuscript stands and charts the course ahead.

You'll receive a detailed editorial letter highlighting your story's strengths and opportunities, followed by a 45-minute strategy session where we'll discuss your optimal path forward.

When we're done, you'll have:

  • A clear snapshot of your manuscript's current strengths and challenges

  • Identification of major storytelling elements that need attention

  • Strategic recommendations for your next revision steps

  • A focused game plan to guide your rewriting journey

This is where insight meets opportunity. Where your story's true potential comes into focus.

Line edit

Let’s call this 'the artistic polish'

Think of this as your manuscript's stylistic elevation. Through a meticulous line-by-line enhancement, I'll amplify your story's rhythm and resonance while preserving your unique voice. From lyrical flow to powerful word choice, emotional cadence to narrative music—every sentence gets the artistic attention it deserves. This isn't about rules; it's about making your prose soar.

You'll receive a manuscript where every line has been crafted for maximum impact, with thoughtful suggestions and creative solutions that respect your artistic vision. Each refinement is made with purpose, ensuring your story captivates without losing its soul.

When we're done, you'll have:

  • In-line suggestions for more powerful word choices and phrasing

  • Clear alternatives for smoother transitions and paragraph flow

  • Specific options to strengthen weak or awkward sentences

  • Detailed notes on enhancing imagery and sensory details

This is where language meets artistry. Where words take flight.

Developmental edit

Also known as ‘a deep dive’

Think of this as your manuscript's transformation—a comprehensive, page-by-page journey through your story. I'll roll up my sleeves and work directly within your pages, providing specific feedback on everything from character development to scene-level tension. This intensive edit delivers concrete examples and actionable suggestions throughout your manuscript.

You'll receive detailed in-line comments throughout your manuscript plus an in-depth editorial letter that guides you through specific changes and opportunities, identifying not just what to change, but how to change it.

When we're done, you'll have:

  • Detailed, page-specific comments throughout your manuscript

  • Concrete examples of how to strengthen each story element

  • Scene-by-scene guidance for deepening impact and engagement

  • Specific techniques for elevating your unique voice and vision

This is where potential meets precision. Where your story emerges stronger, scene by scene.

How much will it cost to have your work edited?

Professional editing rates:

For developmental editing and line editing services, I follow the standard industry rates established by the Editorial Freelancers Association (EFA).

My manuscript evaluation service is offered at a flat rate of $850, providing you with a comprehensive assessment of your story's potential and a clear path forward.

I believe in transparency and will provide detailed pricing for developmental and line editing services once I understand your project's specific needs.